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:star:Special thanks to ~HollyIST for helping me with the grammar :star:

When something is wrong or bad I'm used to say out loud the sound "tun tun tuuuuuuun" like a spooky sound... well if you read this page you'll say that... maybe I don´t know haha

Remember that I said it would be one baby in this story?? well is this baby.

Hope you like it, and don´t kill me becuase of this NaruIno, can´t help it I'm a NaruIno fan. Next page will be here soon, my mom is out of town and I'm using her computer...shh it's a secret.

Por cierto!! en la página que está en español apartir del cuadro 3 está en ingles, lo cambiaré al rato :)

French Thanks to ~louanne93!!

Ino: Tu ferais mieux d'être seul Naruto...

Je ne peux pas croire que j'ai été assez stupide pour faire ça sans ce putain de préservatif.

Naruto: Ne t'inquiète pas, rien ne se passera, je suis médecin, souviens toi?

Ino: Je viens !

D'abord, il me met enceinte et puis il oublie les clefs.. Si typique...

Qu'est ce …..

Naruto (c) Kishimoto

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Raimoundo Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
Lol don't worry I'm a doctor I gotta try that line one day
emilyvedder Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Richtofen666 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011
I really hope NaruIno wins in the end...
I don't want that baby to have to have his/her daddy in a relationship with anyone but his/her mommy! D:
It'd be cool to have the baby be a boy, and name him something... cool...
Like Arashi or Ryu!
emilyvedder Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know!! that's terrible for a child.
HollyIST Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ I thought I´d continue with the first pages of chapter 5 ^^

"You better be alone naruto." almost! ^^ "You´d better be alone, Naruto."

(she acutally slept with him KNOWING he didnt love her? ... how stupid is this woman! O__O)

...I was so stupid for doing that without..." "I was so stupid to do it without..." ^^ in english sex is referred to with "doing it" ^^ as you might know so I think it would be better to use "it" instead of "that" ^^

"comming." hmm we already had that mistake once didnt we? XD it´s: "Comeing."

"First he let me pregnant and then forget the keys..." "First he impregnates me and then he forgets the keys..."
dont forget the "s" please ^^

emilyvedder Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok!! :)

You'll be soooo proud of me if you start to read Pag100 (when you started with the corrections in the doujin I was doing page 100 and I'm trying to write with proper english, hope I don't dissapoint you ;)

I know right?!?! Ino is so stupid, but as I said, she's in love and women when are in love do stupid things.

I think so... but I don't get it about comming and comeing. Comming is when people enter and Comeing is when people are inside the house and ask the other people to hahaha ok ok, I get it now with my explanation

Thanks!! n.n
HollyIST Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XD hehe I cant wait to see page 100 :D
:) I dont think you´ll disapoint me ;) I believe in you

XD women WHO are in love, do... ^^ or when women are in love, they do...
that´s true... though... I do not believe all women are so stupid...

noooo!!! XD there is no comming XD hahah its only comeing! comming doesnt exist!! XD ^^

welcome ^^
SillySalix3 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why you pervet naruto! :iconteheplz:
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