Special thanks to ~HollyIST for helping me with the grammar
When something is wrong or bad I'm used to say out loud the sound "tun tun tuuuuuuun" like a spooky sound... well if you read this page you'll say that... maybe I don´t know haha
Remember that I said it would be one baby in this story?? well is this baby.
Hope you like it, and don´t kill me becuase of this NaruIno, can´t help it I'm a NaruIno fan. Next page will be here soon, my mom is out of town and I'm using her computer...shh it's a secret.
Por cierto!! en la página que está en español apartir del cuadro 3 está en ingles, lo cambiaré al rato
I really hope NaruIno wins in the end... I don't want that baby to have to have his/her daddy in a relationship with anyone but his/her mommy! D: It'd be cool to have the baby be a boy, and name him something... cool... Like Arashi or Ryu!
^^ I thought I´d continue with the first pages of chapter 5 ^^
"You better be alone naruto." almost! ^^ "You´d better be alone, Naruto."
(she acutally slept with him KNOWING he didnt love her? ... how stupid is this woman! O__O)
...I was so stupid for doing that without..." "I was so stupid to do it without..." ^^ in english sex is referred to with "doing it" ^^ as you might know so I think it would be better to use "it" instead of "that" ^^
"comming." hmm we already had that mistake once didnt we? XD it´s: "Comeing."
"First he let me pregnant and then forget the keys..." "First he impregnates me and then he forgets the keys..." dont forget the "s" please ^^
You'll be soooo proud of me if you start to read Pag100 (when you started with the corrections in the doujin I was doing page 100 and I'm trying to write with proper english, hope I don't dissapoint you
I know right?!?! Ino is so stupid, but as I said, she's in love and women when are in love do stupid things.
I think so... but I don't get it about comming and comeing. Comming is when people enter and Comeing is when people are inside the house and ask the other people to come...in?? hahaha ok ok, I get it now with my explanation
I don't want that baby to have to have his/her daddy in a relationship with anyone but his/her mommy! D:
It'd be cool to have the baby be a boy, and name him something... cool...
Like Arashi or Ryu!
"You better be alone naruto." almost! ^^ "You´d better be alone, Naruto."
(she acutally slept with him KNOWING he didnt love her? ... how stupid is this woman! O__O)
...I was so stupid for doing that without..." "I was so stupid to do it without..." ^^ in english sex is referred to with "doing it" ^^ as you might know so I think it would be better to use "it" instead of "that" ^^
"comming." hmm we already had that mistake once didnt we? XD it´s: "Comeing."
"First he let me pregnant and then forget the keys..." "First he impregnates me and then he forgets the keys..."
dont forget the "s" please ^^
You'll be soooo proud of me if you start to read Pag100 (when you started with the corrections in the doujin I was doing page 100 and I'm trying to write with proper english, hope I don't dissapoint you
I know right?!?! Ino is so stupid, but as I said, she's in love and women when are in love do stupid things.
I think so... but I don't get it about comming and comeing. Comming is when people enter and Comeing is when people are inside the house and ask the other people to come...in?? hahaha ok ok, I get it now with my explanation
Thanks!! n.n
XD women WHO are in love, do... ^^ or when women are in love, they do...
that´s true... though... I do not believe all women are so stupid...
noooo!!! XD there is no comming XD hahah its only comeing! comming doesnt exist!! XD ^^
welcome ^^